I came across another old writing – another poem, at that. It seems I went through a very dark, emo time in my early young adulthood… Anyways, here it is in all it’s gloomy glory.
A bleeding heartThis bleeding heart
My bleeding heart A hopeless romantic flighty and bursting a gentle butterfly carried by the wind This hopeless romantic biting the bitter and spitting the sweet thoughts and words now oppose A bleeding heart pour it out paint the canvas with your poetic sadness This bleeding heart beats merely by design and bled out long ago A weary soul exhausted and waiting a damsel that still let’s her hair down This weary soul too tainted for a sliver of optimism to seep in tired, tired, tired A bleeding heart pour it out This bleeding heart paint the canvas with poetic sadness My bleeding heart pumps only by design now and bled out long ago
Just to say I really like your poems! 😉
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Thanks so much! I kind of feel like a little kid jumping into the deep end and hoping there’s not a shark when I post up my stuff like that. I’m so overly critical of myself that I almost expect it from others, but I’ve gotten such nice things from everyone on here. It means a lot!
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Your very welcome! People tend to be more sincere when their name is associated with their blog, only the odd anonymous sharks slip through the net, but as a fellow writer and poet don’t let anyone deter you, we give ourselves enough crap as it is! 😉
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